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Issue 12 Reviews!

First up, Lois Tilton weighs in at Locus in her short fiction review. Monica Byrne’s “Five Letters from New Laverne,” a “moving story of love and loss,” garnered the coveted Recommended. The other stories also fared well — check out the full review to see what else Lois thought.

And over at the Fantastic Reviews blog, Aaron really liked Erin Cashier’s “Near the Flame.”  He says Shimmer is “…one of the best (and best looking) semiprozines in the market.” and “Near the Flame” is a memorable tale featuring a powerful narrative voice. Erin Cashier is a subtle author, yet the nuances of her writing never distract from the story.”

Thanks, Lois and Aaron!

Find out more about Issue 12 here.

Author Spotlight: Krista Hoeppner Leahy

Krista says, “Sound prompts were offered for initial inspiration, and one evoked heavy rainfall on a metal roof. From there, I thought about the desire to be drenched. And how close the desire to be drenched is to the desire to drown. Voilà, the birth of Phil and his particular tin predicament.”

Phil dreamt of the sea the way candles dream of flame.

He would have fled to the sea long ago — candle wax vanished into air — but unlike candles, Phil had Molly. Molly who’d rescued him, held him close, her song of a face whispering its own drenching temptation.

But still, some nights after Molly fell asleep, the sea sang, and Phil couldn’t resist. Rusty step after rusty step, he would creak his way down to the shore. In the salt-scented air, the pull and call of the wide water begged him to wade, dip, dive in if he dared. It pleaded with him to abandon his rusted ankles, elbows, hips, knees, iron joints, and strong shoulders to the blue wet of possibility. It promised him he would not only float, but would sail free. Come, come home to me.

Listen to Krista read the opening of her Shimmer 12 story, “No Place Like Home, or Building the Yellow Brick Road.” (3kb, mp3)

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Author Spotlight: Monica Byrne

Author Monica Byrne talks about the genesis of her Shimmer 12 story, “Five Letters from New Laverne“:

This story is very important to me. It’s very close to my heart, because it is the first story I wrote after deciding to become a writer–deciding that that was really all I ever wanted to do and that I was going to build my life around doing that. But what happened right as I decided that, and right as I was about to embark on that, is…tragedy.

“Five Letters from New Laverne” puts me in mind of Le Guin’s The Left Hand of Darkness and encompasses all that a Shimmer story should. It is soaked in sorrow yet ringed in hope. I hope you will pick up Shimmer 12 today so you can experience its wonder for yourself.

Author Spotlight: Peter M. Ball

Author Peter M. Ball reads from, “The Mike and Carly Story,” which you can find in its glorious entirety in Issue 12 of Shimmer, now available!

So the trouble starts like this: Mike likes Carly and Carly doesn’t like him back. Mike’s trying to figure it out as best he can, then he turns fifteen and this werewolf thing happens – boom – and he spends three nights a month camping out in the middle of nowhere because a pining teenage werewolf and the full moon just aren’t a great combination. It’s enough to make you feel bad for the guy.

Click here to listen to Peter read from his story. (15mb, mp3)

Want to read the rest of the issue? Of course you do, because it’s all spectacular. Nine stories that will take you places you’ve never been before await you in Issue 12 of Shimmer.

 

Rejection Dissection

Everybody does it.

You eye the rejection in your hand (or your inbox) and wonder, “what did the editor mean by that?” The paper is blue! The paper is yellow! The paper is…white? Wait! Augh! What are these typed words? Who signed it? Did they lick the envelope? What’s the timestamp on the email? Who reads slush at 3 a.m.? Augh! What? What?

The Bottom Line

I’m going to give you the bottom line first, because ultimately, that’s what you care about. It’s what you want to know. It’s the magic answer! A rejection means no. Plain and simple. The story didn’t work for the editor. That’s it.

But That Can’t Be All!

Yeah, as a new writer, you want a little more than that. Why didn’t it work? What does this rejection really mean about this specific story?

Specifics

Beyond the time the rejection was sent (yes, sometimes we read slush at odd hours…we’re writers, too…we aren’t normal), and beyond the color of the paper it may have arrived on, what do all these jumbled words mean? Let’s see if we can dissect a bit.

The Story Didn’t Grab Me

This can mean a few things, but chiefly, it means the story didn’t rise up and yank the reader into the world and its problems. The characters possibly didn’t have a clear problem from the start; the world didn’t make itself immediately clear, or the clues provided weren’t intriguing enough to keep the editor reading. This is often tied to:

The Story Was Slow to Start

We are told to start in media res–in the middle of things. We want to be sucked into the story from paragraph one. Don’t bury the good stuff. If the good stuff doesn’t show up until page twelve…why? Try putting your page twelve goodies on page one. Try putting them in sentence one. In a short story, you have no time to waste. Readers want to be pulled out of their ordinary worlds, into some place extraordinary.

I Liked X, but Y Didn’t Work For Me

This typically means we liked the story, but there was something broken within its framework. The story is close, but not right for Shimmer. Which ties into:

Rewriting to Work in the Helpful Bits You May Get in a Rejection

Unless a Shimmer editor specifically asks for a rewrite, do not submit one. Plain and simple. We try to comment on every story we receive. I liked X, but the story didn’t work because of Y. This doesn’t mean that if you fix Y, the story would be a sale to us.

Not A Good Fit

Every publication wants something slightly different. Shimmer‘s stories are unlike Asimov’s stories. Shimmer‘s stories are unlike Realms of Fantasy stories. Shimmer‘s editors pretty much know what they’re after, but sometimes they don’t know what that is until they see it. Did I ever dream about falling in love with a story about a caveman in the slush pile? I did not, but when I saw the story, I knew it was a fit for Shimmer. Always read a few issues of the publication you’re submitting to, to get a feel for what they really want.

If it says “please send us more and/or your next”….

Do it. Not every rejection will say this; if yours does, please take it to heart. It means we really do want to see more from you.

And That’s the Key to Everything

“Your next story.” The most solid advice I can give here is this: don’t spend too much time dissecting one rejection. Mark it down in your submission log, see which market your story may fit, and send it out again. A story can’t sell if it’s not in an editor’s possession. Also: keep writing–always have a story ready to go–and keep submitting! No rejection is personal. It just means that story didn’t work for that editor. Keep submitting and eventually you’ll find the right combination of pieces.

Your Turn

What was your worst rejection? What was your best? You don’t have to name names, but sometimes rejections can actually be helpful.

Evil Editor Stories: A Really Bad Idea

Okay, look. Rejections suck. I know that, you know that. Rejections aren’t personal. However, when you’ve just received rejection number twenty on a story, or you’ve been submitting for ages and nobody’s biting, it can be hard to remember that.

One of the worst ways to deal with a rejection is to write an “Evil Editor” story and submit it. We occasionally get these in the slush. Sometimes they are generic Evil Editors Get Their Comeuppance tales. Other times they’re patterned to a specific editor.

They’re always a bad idea. Here are four reasons why.

1. We Can’t Buy It.

In huge flashing lights, strobed across the underside of midnight clouds like the Bat Signal, the number one reason not to submit an Evil Editor story is this: We can’t and won’t buy it. Not if it’s about the evil editor getting eviscerated by rejected authors. Especially not if it’s about a specific editor –- and extra-especially not if it’s about a specific editor we like (Pro Tip: we like a lot of editors).

And just as a side note… Shimmer is really not a likely place for gory slasher horror stories whether they’ve got editors as the victims or not.

2. It’s a Waste of Your Talent

Look… I once received an Evil Editor story that was really vile and nasty, but well written. It made me sad that the author had spent their writing energy on something that negative and destructive. Time spent writing a hate story that nobody wants to read could be spent writing something you enjoy. Don’t let your reaction to a rejection also steal time from your next story!

3. The Threats Aren’t Funny (even when they are)

Sometimes, Evil Editor stories really are funny. But it doesn’t matter. They look like a threat. Even if it’s kind of hilarious, a story in which a poor downtrodden writer kills or maims the editor who’s been keeping him down is threatening to the editor who has to push the reject button on it. Are you going to totally flip out if we reject you? Should we be worried?

I always hesitate to say, “Oh, nobody should ever write a story about X subject.” However, in this case, you’re better off just not doing it. Even if you have the funniest story idea ever.

4. It’s Unprofessional.

Period. When we buy a story, we’re entering into a business deal. We will be working together. There’s going to be a contract and your story in print and all kinds of goodness. An Evil Editor story makes the editor wonder just how you’ll respond to revision requests or copy-editing.

It’s not a 100% thing. Some editors will not hold it against you on your next submission, in which case, whew! But others will. I figure that it’s best not to take the risk. Even though we have stories about aliens and unicorns, publishing is still a business, and you’re better off acting professionally.

But Rejections DO Suck.

Sure, I’ve received plenty of rejections, myself, but there’s still that come-down after I get each one. It’s easy to feel like the industry is biased against your particular style of writing, but that’s not true. Chances are good that writing has been your dream for a long time. Damn those editors for standing in the way of your dream! Or… don’t.

If you find yourself writing Evil Editor stories to relieve the frustration, it’s time to find some better ways to cope.

I recommend having a set of close friends who are also writers, who also get rejected, and who understand how much it stings.

Even if you know better than to write an Evil Editor story, there’s nothing wrong with getting together with friends and having a vent session. This is a hard business, and sometimes you just want to scream.

Afterward, put your writer hat back on and write your heart out.

Personally, if I am feeling rejected I like to make a heavy metal playlist and listen to that while writing. One of my friends will go for a walk, or go out to dinner with his family. Hey, it might even be a good time to dust off your old copy of Grand Theft Auto.

How about you?

What do you do to get your confidence back after a particularly depressing rejection?

Okay, look. Rejections suck. I know that, you know that. Rejections aren’t personal. However, when you’ve just received rejection number twenty on a story, or you’ve been submitting for ages and nobody’s biting, it can be hard to remember that.

One of the worst ways to deal with a rejection is to write an “Evil Editor” story and submit it. We occasionally get these in the slush. Sometimes they are generic Evil Editors Get Their Comeuppance tales. Other times they’re patterned to a specific editor.

They’re always a bad idea. Here are four reasons why.

  1. We Can’t Buy It.

In huge flashing lights, strobed across the underside of midnight clouds like the Bat Signal, the number one reason not to submit an Evil Editor story is this: We can’t and won’t buy it. Not if it’s about the evil editor getting eviscerated by rejected authors. Especially not if it’s about a specific editor –- and extra-especially not if it’s about a specific editor we like (Pro Tip: we like a lot of editors).

And just as a side note… Shimmer is really not a likely place for gory slasher horror stories whether they’ve got editors as the victims or not.

  1. It’s a Waste of Your Talent

Look… I once received an Evil Editor story that was really vile and nasty, but well written. It made me sad that the author had spent their writing energy on something that negative and destructive. Time spent writing a hate story that nobody wants to read could be spent writing something you enjoy. Don’t let your reaction to a rejection also steal time from your next story!

  1. The Threats Aren’t Funny (even when they are)

Sometimes, Evil Editor stories really are funny. But it doesn’t matter. They look like a threat. Even if it’s kind of hilarious, a story in which a poor downtrodden writer kills or maims the editor who’s been keeping him down is threatening to the editor who has to push the reject button on it. Are you going to totally flip out if we reject you? Should we be worried?

I always hesitate to say, “Oh, nobody should ever write a story about X subject.” However, in this case, you’re better off just not doing it. Even if you have the funniest story idea ever.

  1. It’s Unprofessional.

Period. When we buy a story, we’re entering into a business deal. We will be working together. There’s going to be a contract and your story in print and all kinds of goodness. An Evil Editor story makes the editor wonder just how you’ll respond to revision requests or copy-editing.

It’s not a 100% thing. Some editors will not hold it against you on your next submission, in which case, whew! But others will. I figure that it’s best not to take the risk. Even though we have stories about aliens and unicorns, publishing is still a business, and you’re better off acting professionally.

But Rejections DO Suck.

Sure, I’ve received plenty of rejections, myself, but there’s still that come-down after I get each one. It’s easy to feel like the industry is biased against your particular style of writing, but that’s not true. Chances are good that writing has been your dream for a long time. Damn those editors for standing in the way of your dream! Or… don’t.

If you find yourself writing Evil Editor stories to relieve the frustration, it’s time to find some better ways to cope.

I recommend having a set of close friends who are also writers, who also get rejected, and who understand how much it stings.

Even if you know better than to write an Evil Editor story, there’s nothing wrong with getting together with friends and having a vent session. This is a hard business, and sometimes you just want to scream.

Afterward, put your writer hat back on and write your heart out.

Personally, if I am feeling rejected I like to make a heavy metal playlist and listen to that while writing. One of my friends will go for a walk, or go out to dinner with his family. Hey, it might even be a good time to dust off your old copy of Grand Theft Auto.

How about you? What do you do to get your confidence back after a particularly depressing rejection?

Byrne Bonus

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Issue 12

Click here to download Monica Byrne’s story “Five Letters From New Laverne.” The story is part of Shimmer’s 12th issue. If you like what you read here, why not buy the full issue?

Here’s an excerpt:

My Hiro,

We descended to the moon, lurch after lurch, like a marble dropping down a staircase. … After we cleared the clouds, I strained to see the colony, which resembles a warren, built out of solid basalt. It houses all twelve residents. The compound rests just within the dark side of the moon. New Laverne does not turn as it orbits, but rather keeps the same face sunward. The border between dark and light is only a mile away. The colonists live in twilight.

At the landing pad, I met Abbot Flores, the head of the colony. Hiro, I really thought I had prepared myself for the thing for which the colonists of New Laverne are famous, but upon coming to the moment, I realized I had not taken it to heart. Redness bloomed upon the abbot’s hands, head, and feet, the gleaming jewel-like red of open wounds, oozing rosy fluid. Upon seeing this, my own heart bloomed with adrenaline; I would call it an animal intimacy, a shared pulse.

Enjoy!

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Issue 12

Issue 12: Now Available

If you’ve read Shimmer before, you know what to expect: a delicious collection of imaginative short stories.

If you’re a new reader, welcome! Let me tell you a little more about Shimmer.

One reviewer said Shimmer is

“unfailingly well written, which gives hope for the future of the genre.”

Wow! Not bad for 100 pages of fiction. Our stories are mostly contemporary fantasy, with a few ventures into science fiction or horror, and the stories tend to be tinged with sorrow (though we’re not averse to the occasional funny tale).

We publish a wide range of authors, from those you already know and love, like Jay Lake and Ken Scholes, to the rising stars like M. K. Hobson, Aliette de Bodard, and Angela Slatter, to the new authors you don’t know you love yet, like Krista Hoeppner Leahy and Erin Cashier.

We released our first issue in 2005. We’ve gotten stronger with each issue, and Issue 12 contains wonders and marvels, from Peter M. Ball‘s punk-not-emo teenage werewolf story, to Josh Storey‘s gorgeous take on the tale of Orpheus, to Monica Byrne‘s story of stigmata in a colony on a distant planet. We’ve got an imaginative reinterpretations of Little Red Riding Hood and the Wizard of Oz, and a sweet little zombie love story. And more! We packed 9 stories into this issue.

At just over 100 pages, the print edition is slim and sturdy enough to carry with you to read anywhere. Shimmer’s one of the best-looking magazines out there: glossy covers, lovely illustrations, and perfect-bound (just like a paperback book). Or get the PDF edition if you prefer to read in DRM-free digital form.

It’s friggin’ awesome. It makes a great gift, too! (Is it time to start shopping for Christmas yet? Maybe!)

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Table of Contents (With Tasty Excerpts!)

The Mike and Carly Story, Without the Gossip, by Peter M. Ball

So the trouble starts like this: Mike likes Carly and Carly doesn’t like him back. Mike’s trying to figure it out as best he can, then he turns fifteen and this werewolf thing happens — boom — and he spends three nights a month camping out in the middle of nowhere because a pining teenage werewolf and the full moon just aren’t a great combination. It’s enough to make you feel bad for the guy.

None of this is news, yeah? I mean, the werewolf thing maybe, but the rest of it’s obvious. You see the two of them together all the time, Carly with her wireframe glasses and her hot-pink bob, Mike with his eyeliner and his older brother’s black Nirvana shirt, and it’s clear to everyone Mike never considered wearing mascara before Carly decided she was into punk — punk, not emo — and Mike decided to become punk-not-emo too, just like that, trailing along after Carly like her own private entourage of one.

Seek Him i’th’Other Place Yourself, by Josh Storey

Your class is held at an ungodly hour by undergrad standards, but news of your madness draws them to you anyway. Rumors that you’d give out easy A’s, coupled with a voyeuristic urge to peer into grief, ensures your lecture hall is filled.

You are not easy on them.

In the classroom, you are stone, and you lecture on derivations of Orpheus. … On the days you can’t function, you hide all emotion and encourage class discussion in lieu of lecturing. Today, you ask why Orpheus, in all the variations, fails to return from the underworld with Eurydice. The first few answers are obvious and expected, but after the room warms, you get to the meat. Calli, fifth row, third chair, strikes home. “Because he was a coward. He tries to bring his lover back from the dead, but he isn’t willing to die for her,” Calli says. “He wants to walk through Hell and come out clean on the other side. That’s not love. I don’t know what it is, but it’s not love.”

Near the Flame, by Erin Cashier

Oh oh oh, let me tell you about Nygibe — fair and wise, with skin as dark as the night and eyes like rising embers.

She was just a girl, see. She didn’t know of inland or outland, winter or spring. Where she lived was the coast, and there it was always hot. Agawa poured light down all the time, and for them, it was always summer.

When she was small, she learned to weave nets with her mother, until her mother passed away. Then Older Brother took her up. What did he know of raising a girl? Nothing. So he took her out on boats, learned her how to swim, and set her to fixing nets and carving fishing spears. On every spear, she carved the story of his success, and every spear he threw out came back with a fish on the end, just like she’d written it.

They were very happy, for a time.

Red and Grandma Inside the Wolf, by Carmen Lau

My cape was a long red thing. My mother spent day after day spinning yarn from nettles, night after night weeping over a loom. She bit her own tongue and spit the blood to dye the yarn. By the end of the weaving she couldn’t speak. She did all that, even after I told her nettles wouldn’t make good yarn, nights aren’t good for spinning, blood would fade after so many washings.

“My mother makes me wear it in case I die in the woods,” I said, “so she can find my corpse with ease.” Being on the cusp of womanhood, I am always on the brink of disaster and death.

An Organization Man in the Time Long After Legends, by Jen Volant

He had bungled the last job, taken too long on this one, and the Organization was sending an assistant. A younger man (they were all younger these days) who would steal the case, steal the promotion. Perhaps if he worked faster, he could uncover a lead before the assistant arrived. Maybe significant progress toward finding the creature would be enough to get him safely behind a desk before it was too late. He gazed out at the rundown buildings across the road, the boarded windows and padlocked doors. He heaved himself from the chair and went out into the heat, rubbing at the pale band of skin on the ring finger of his left hand.

For hours, he trudged through stores and along sidewalks seeking signs of the creature. In a crowded laundromat, no one looked at anyone — each was engrossed in the inner world that city people often built for themselves. He had just made a rough circuit of the place, one of a long series of rough circuits around the neighborhood, all equally fruitless. He was halfway to the door when he saw it. When he saw her.

Crepuscular, by Ben Francisco

Roger brings me into the backyard and there’s the Francophile snowman, greeting me with a tip of his beret. He’s the snowman of the story books: a column of three perfect spheres, thin arms made of sticks, a button nose, two marble eyes, and lips of roasted peppers. And of course a checkered beret, a purple ascot, and a cigarette.

“Monsieur Frosty,” says Roger, “this is the gal I was telling you about. This is Jessica.”

Monsieur Frosty takes a drag with one twig-arm, then takes my hand with the other and raises it to his lips for a kiss that’s gentle but cold, like a soft flurry of snow. “A pleasure, mademoiselle,” he says with a thick French accent, “to meet such a beautiful woman.”

You Had Me at Rarrrgg, by Nicky Drayden

Few folks know that zombies prefer cat brains over human ones, cats being a smidge smarter and all. Problem is cats are just so damned quick. Then again, few folks know anything these days on account of there just being two of us left. And I can’t rightly call myself human anymore, now can I?

Dr. Arbuckle performs last- minute tests on the machine as I watch. She swats me away when I get too close. Not in a mean sort of way, but like Renée used to when I’d lift the lid off the stew pot to sneak a taste. Way back then, before Renée got the side of her head all chewed up. Back then, when I still ate stew.

No Place Like Home, or Building the Yellow Brick Road, by Krista Hoeppner Leahy

Phil dreamt of the sea the way candles dream of flame.

He would have fled to the sea long ago — candle wax vanished into air — but unlike candles, Phil had Molly. Molly who’d rescued him, held him close, her song of a face whispering its own drenching temptation.

But still, some nights after Molly fell asleep, the sea sang, and Phil couldn’t resist. Rusty step after rusty step, he would creak his way down to the shore. In the salt-scented air, the pull and call of the wide water begged him to wade, dip, dive in if he dared. It pleaded with him to abandon his rusted ankles, elbows, hips, knees, iron joints, and strong shoulders to the blue wet of possibility. It promised him he would not only float, but would sail free. Come, come home to me.

Five Letters from New Laverne, by Monica Byrne

My Hiro,

We descended to the moon, lurch after lurch, like a marble dropping down a staircase. … After we cleared the clouds, I strained to see the colony, which resembles a warren, built out of solid basalt. It houses all twelve residents. The compound rests just within the dark side of the moon. New Laverne does not turn as it orbits, but rather keeps the same face sunward. The border between dark and light is only a mile away. The colonists live in twilight.

At the landing pad, I met Abbot Flores, the head of the colony. Hiro, I really thought I had prepared myself for the thing for which the colonists of New Laverne are famous, but upon coming to the moment, I realized I had not taken it to heart. Redness bloomed upon the abbot’s hands, head, and feet, the gleaming jewel-like red of open wounds, oozing rosy fluid. Upon seeing this, my own heart bloomed with adrenaline; I would call it an animal intimacy, a shared pulse.

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Short Stories Are Not Novels!

There’s tons of information on-line about how to submit novels, but relatively little about submitting short stories. I think this has led to the misunderstanding that the novel-submitting process is identical to the short story submitting process. While there is overlap, this is actually not as true as you’d imagine.

For novels, the basic idea is to write a query letter and a summary of your book and to send it to your carefully-researched list of agents and/or editors. Sending a query or manuscript to multiple people is called “simultaneous submission” and is generally okay at that stage in the process. Many novel submitting guides offer techniques to catch an agent or editor’s interest and quickly build a rapport with them.

So that’s novels.

But short stories are different. Unless the guidelines specify otherwise, there’s no need to summarize your story, simultaneous submission is not okay, and you don’t have to work quite as hard to catch our eye with your cover letter. While every short story magazine has its idiosyncrasies, those are the general guidelines. They’re certainly true for Shimmer.

A summary of your story is unnecessary and generally not desired.

Why?

Novels are LONG (70,000 words and up), and the slush pile is deep. There isn’t time to read everything. Agents and editors aren’t only looking to find out if your book is good, they want to know if it’s the right kind of book for them. A summary tells them the arc of a long work before they read it. It lets them know which books to read, and which are simply not right for their line.

But in the short story world, we’ll find out about your story when we read it, and honestly we get a better read going in without any foreknowledge besides the title (just like a reader picking up the magazine.) Summaries are hard to write and often make your story look less cool than it actually is. Let us judge your story, not your summary-writing skill.

More importantly, submitting a correct cover letter gives the editor confidence that you understand common submission process.

But here’s a wrinkle specific to Shimmer.

Our guidelines state that we prefer works of 5000 words or less. Many markets have a firm maximum word-count and don’t want to see anything above it, but we say, “but [if] you believe we would love it, please send us a query briefly describing the story along with the first page…”

Huh, that’s kind of like the novel submission process, isn’t it?

Yep, that’s because we get a lot of manuscripts to read every month, A LOT, but also because it’s less likely that we’ll buy a story over 5000 words, we want a short summary to know if it’s a story we’re interested in before we put in the time to read it.

Sim Subs

Check the guidelines; most magazines don’t allow simultaneous submissions.

It usually takes Shimmer from one to four weeks to get back to writers about their submissions. This may seem like a long time, but it’s actually pretty fast for the industry. This can get complicated and messy when a story is at multiple markets, so we ask that you wait until we’ve given you an answer till you send it somewhere else.

Do you need to catch our eye with a flashy cover-letter?

Nah, a quick hello is often the best policy.

It can be hard to build rapport with people you don’t know, and it’s often better to just go for simple and professional. Tell us the name of your story, how long it is, and if you have previous sales, mention the best three. I have some example cover letters on my personal blog, and you can read Shimmer’s take on cover letters earlier in this series.

So that’s it!

Format your story correctly, put it in the e-mail with a short, polite cover-letter (the cover-letter should go in the body of the email) and hit send! We’ll do the rest. Get back to
writing!

Got any questions or war stories? Leave ’em in the comments section below.

13 Lucky Questions with Mary Robinette Kowal

Mary Robinette Kowal
Mary Robinette Kowal. Photo © 2010 Annaliese Moyer

Mary Robinette Kowal, Art Director Emeritus for Shimmer, is never still for very long. She works as a professional puppeteer and voice actor, is the Vice President of Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America, and now has her first novel gracing bookstore shelves everywhere. Mary took time out of her busy schedule to talk with Shimmer about that new novel, Shades of Milk and Honey (Tor, 2010), “the fantasy novel that Jane Austen might have written.”

1. Shades of Milk and Honey has been described as Pride and Prejudice with magic. What drew you to the Regency timeframe?

I love Jane Austen and at the time I was reading Persuasion. I wondered why no one was writing these intimate family dramas in fantasy.

2. Can you explain some about the process of selling your first book? Was this the first book you wrote and tried to sell?

This is the fourth book I’ve written and the second one I’ve tried to sell. Mostly it involves a lot of waiting. I got very lucky and have a wonderful agent who does all the hard work of actually sending it out. With the first novel, I was sending it to publishers on my own and that takes forever.

3. One of your short stories (“First Flight“) involves a time machine. If you could travel back in time to the Regency period, what would you do? Where would you go? Who would you seek out?

First of all, I’d disguise myself as a man. Ladies had better clothes but not enough freedom of movement for my taste. Since I’ll still sound like a modern American, I’ll study with an local acting teacher first to try to blend in. Once I feel comfortable there, I’ll do a tour of the continent. In particular, I’d like to see the shadow puppeteer Seraphin in Paris.

4. Did working with Shimmer and getting a behind the scenes look at how a magazine comes together impact your approach to your own fiction?

Absolutely. Reading slush helped me understand what editors mean when they say things like a story “doesn’t rise above.” There are a lot of stories that are unflawed but also not doing anything more than telling a competent story. It’s still an elusive idea, but time reading the slush pile definitely helped with that.

5. Puppetry, travel, vice president of the SFWA…how do you balance everything you do and still make time for writing?

Honestly? Structured procrastination. It’s much easier to justify putting something off if there’s another thing that is more pressing. If you manage them right, generally it’s possible to use the urge to flee to get everything done.

6. Finish the sentence: “I wish I could _____.”

I wish I could take a nap, now.

7. What is the best piece of writing advice you’ve been given? Alternatively, what’s the worst?

Kristine Kathryn Rusch said that the manuscript is the tool with which you are telling the story in your head. Sometimes, you’ve picked the wrong tool. The problem is with the manuscript and it is not a precious thing. The worst advice was to put all five senses on every single page. I wound up with a story that was incomprehensible and put my instructor, who’d told me to do that, to sleep.

8. What favorite book do you wish you could forget, so you could have the pleasure of reading it for the first time again?

The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell.

9. What was the most frustrating thing about writing Shades of Milk and Honey?

When I realized that the plot had taken a wrong turn and that I’d need to throw out 20,000 words. Bear in mind that I’m an outliner, and yet still. I needed to toss those chapters and re-outline based on what I was discovering as I was writing.

10. What do you know now that you didn’t know before the writing and publication of Shades of Milk and Honey?

The word “check” only means “stop” in 1814. So it wouldn’t be used in the sense of “I shall check on the strawberries” since that would mean “I will stop the strawberries.”

Mary's Favorite Royal
Mary's Favorite Royal

11. Among your collection, which is your favorite typewriter? Or, is there one out there that you love but haven’t yet been able to acquire?

I have a Duotone Royal that has a sans serif font. It’s a beautiful maroon and black machine. The one that I’m still looking for is the typewriter I let get away. It was a Corona #3, folding typewriter, in Oxblood red.

12. Pride and Prejudice or Sense and Sensibility?

Sense and Sensibility.

13. When can readers expect the sequel, Glamour in Glass, to hit shelves? Any sneak peeks?

It comes out in early 2012. Here are the opening lines, “There are few things in this world which can simultaneously delight and dismay in the same manner as a formal dinner party. Finding oneself a guest of honour, only increases the presentiment of unease, should one be disposed to such feelings.”

Mary Robinette Kowal, Art Director Emeritus for Shimmer, is never still for very long.

She works as a professional puppeteer and voice actor, is the Vice President of Science

Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America, and now has her first novel gracing bookstore

shelves everywhere. Mary took time out of her busy schedule to talk with Shimmer about

that new novel, Shades of Milk and Honey.

If you would like to catch the author and her novel in person, look for her at:

KGB Bar Fantastic Fiction, 85 E. 4th Street, New York, NY, 10003: Wednesday

August 18th, 7-8pm. SF IN SF AT VARIETY THEATER 582 Market Street @

Montgomery (1st floor of The Hobart Bldg), San Francisco, CA 94104: Saturday August

21st, 6-7pm. Tsunami Books 2585 Willamette St. Eugene, OR 97405: Tuesday August

24th, 5-6pm.

13 Lucky Questions with Mary Robinette Kowal

by E. Catherine Tobler

1. Shades of Milk and Honey has been described as Pride and Prejudice with magic.

What drew you to the Regency timeframe?

I love Jane Austen and at the time I was reading Persuasion. I wondered why no one was

writing these intimate family dramas in fantasy.

2. Can you explain some about the process of selling your first book? Was this the

first book you wrote and tried to sell?

This is the fourth book I’ve written and the second one I’ve tried to sell. Mostly it

involves a lot of waiting. I got very lucky and have a wonderful agent who does all the

hard work of actually sending it out. With the first novel, I was sending it to publishers

on my own and that takes forever.

3. One of your short stories (“First Flight”) involves a time machine. If you could

travel back in time to the Regency period, what would you do? Where would you

go? Who would you seek out?

First of all, I’d disguise myself as a man. Ladies had better clothes but not enough

freedom of movement for my taste. Since I’ll still sound like a modern American, I’ll

study with an local acting teacher first to try to blend in. Once I feel comfortable there,

I’ll do a tour of the continent. In particular, I’d like to see the shadow puppeteer Seraphin

in Paris.

4. Did working with Shimmer and getting a behind the scenes look at how

a magazine comes together impact your approach to your own fiction?

Absolutely. Reading slush helped me understand what editors mean when they say things

like a story “doesn’t rise above.” There are a lot of stories that are unflawed but also not

doing anything more than telling a competent story. It’s still an elusive idea, but time

reading the slush pile definitely helped with that.

5. Puppetry, travel, vice president of the SFWA…how do you balance everything you

do and still make time for writing?

Honestly? Structured procrastination. It’s much easier to justify putting something off

if there’s another thing that is more pressing. If you manage them right, generally it’s

possible to use the urge to flee to get everything done.

6. Finish the sentence: “I wish I could _____.”

I wish I could take a nap, now.

7. What is the best piece of writing advice you’ve been given? Alternatively, what’s

the worst?

Kristine Kathryn Rusch said that the manuscript is the tool with which you are telling

the story in your head. Sometimes, you’ve picked the wrong tool. The problem is with

the manuscript and it is not a precious thing. The worst advice was to put all five senses

on every single page. I wound up with a story that was incomprehensible and put my

instructor, who’d told me to do that, to sleep.

8. What favorite book do you wish you could forget, so you could have the pleasure

of reading it for the first time again?

The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell.

9. What was the most frustrating thing about writing Shades of Milk and Honey?

When I realized that the plot had taken a wrong turn and that I’d need to throw out 20,000

words. Bear in mind that I’m an outliner, and yet still. I needed to toss those chapters and

re-outline based on what I was discovering as I was writing.

10. What do you know now that you didn’t know before the writing and

publication of Shades of Milk and Honey?

The word “check” only means “stop” in 1814. So it wouldn’t be used in the sense of “I

shall check on the strawberries” since that would mean “I will stop the strawberries.”

11. Among your collection, which is your favorite typewriter? Or, is there one out

there that you love but haven’t yet been able to acquire?

I have a Duotone Royal that has a sans serif font. It’s a beautiful maroon and black

machine. The one that I’m still looking for is the typewriter I let get away. It was a

Corona #3, folding typewriter, in Oxblood red.

12. Pride and Prejudice or Sense and Sensibility?

Sense and Sensibility

13. When can readers expect Glamour in Glass to hit shelves? Any sneak peeks?

It comes out in early 2012. Here are the opening lines, “There are few things in this

world which can simultaneously delight and dismay in the same manner as a formal

dinner party. Finding oneself a guest of honour, only increases the presentiment of

unease, should one be disposed to such feelings.”

Mary Robinette Kowal, Art Director Emeritus for Shimmer, is never still for very long.

She works as a professional puppeteer and voice actor, is the Vice President of Science

Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America, and now has her first novel gracing bookstore

shelves everywhere. Mary took time out of her busy schedule to talk with Shimmer about

that new novel, Shades of Milk and Honey.

If you would like to catch the author and her novel in person, look for her at:

KGB Bar Fantastic Fiction, 85 E. 4th Street, New York, NY, 10003: Wednesday

August 18th, 7-8pm. SF IN SF AT VARIETY THEATER 582 Market Street @

Montgomery (1st floor of The Hobart Bldg), San Francisco, CA 94104: Saturday August

21st, 6-7pm. Tsunami Books 2585 Willamette St. Eugene, OR 97405: Tuesday August

24th, 5-6pm.

13 Lucky Questions with Mary Robinette Kowal

by E. Catherine Tobler

1. Shades of Milk and Honey has been described as Pride and Prejudice with magic.

What drew you to the Regency timeframe?

I love Jane Austen and at the time I was reading Persuasion. I wondered why no one was

writing these intimate family dramas in fantasy.

2. Can you explain some about the process of selling your first book? Was this the

first book you wrote and tried to sell?

This is the fourth book I’ve written and the second one I’ve tried to sell. Mostly it

involves a lot of waiting. I got very lucky and have a wonderful agent who does all the

hard work of actually sending it out. With the first novel, I was sending it to publishers

on my own and that takes forever.

3. One of your short stories (“First Flight”) involves a time machine. If you could

travel back in time to the Regency period, what would you do? Where would you

go? Who would you seek out?

First of all, I’d disguise myself as a man. Ladies had better clothes but not enough

freedom of movement for my taste. Since I’ll still sound like a modern American, I’ll

study with an local acting teacher first to try to blend in. Once I feel comfortable there,

I’ll do a tour of the continent. In particular, I’d like to see the shadow puppeteer Seraphin

in Paris.

4. Did working with Shimmer and getting a behind the scenes look at how

a magazine comes together impact your approach to your own fiction?

Absolutely. Reading slush helped me understand what editors mean when they say things

like a story “doesn’t rise above.” There are a lot of stories that are unflawed but also not

doing anything more than telling a competent story. It’s still an elusive idea, but time

reading the slush pile definitely helped with that.

5. Puppetry, travel, vice president of the SFWA…how do you balance everything you

do and still make time for writing?

Honestly? Structured procrastination. It’s much easier to justify putting something off

if there’s another thing that is more pressing. If you manage them right, generally it’s

possible to use the urge to flee to get everything done.

6. Finish the sentence: “I wish I could _____.”

I wish I could take a nap, now.

7. What is the best piece of writing advice you’ve been given? Alternatively, what’s

the worst?

Kristine Kathryn Rusch said that the manuscript is the tool with which you are telling

the story in your head. Sometimes, you’ve picked the wrong tool. The problem is with

the manuscript and it is not a precious thing. The worst advice was to put all five senses

on every single page. I wound up with a story that was incomprehensible and put my

instructor, who’d told me to do that, to sleep.

8. What favorite book do you wish you could forget, so you could have the pleasure

of reading it for the first time again?

The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell.

9. What was the most frustrating thing about writing Shades of Milk and Honey?

When I realized that the plot had taken a wrong turn and that I’d need to throw out 20,000

words. Bear in mind that I’m an outliner, and yet still. I needed to toss those chapters and

re-outline based on what I was discovering as I was writing.

10. What do you know now that you didn’t know before the writing and

publication of Shades of Milk and Honey?

The word “check” only means “stop” in 1814. So it wouldn’t be used in the sense of “I

shall check on the strawberries” since that would mean “I will stop the strawberries.”

11. Among your collection, which is your favorite typewriter? Or, is there one out

there that you love but haven’t yet been able to acquire?

I have a Duotone Royal that has a sans serif font. It’s a beautiful maroon and black

machine. The one that I’m still looking for is the typewriter I let get away. It was a

Corona #3, folding typewriter, in Oxblood red.

12. Pride and Prejudice or Sense and Sensibility?

Sense and Sensibility

13. When can readers expect Glamour in Glass to hit shelves? Any sneak peeks?

It comes out in early 2012. Here are the opening lines, “There are few things in this

world which can simultaneously delight and dismay in the same manner as a formal

dinner party. Finding oneself a guest of honour, only increases the presentiment of

unease, should one be disposed to such feelings.”

Mary Robinette Kowal, Art Director Emeritus for Shimmer, is never still for very long.
She works as a professional puppeteer and voice actor, is the Vice President of Science
Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America, and now has her first novel gracing bookstore
shelves everywhere. Mary took time out of her busy schedule to talk with Shimmer about
that new novel, Shades of Milk and Honey.

If you would like to catch the author and her novel in person, look for her at:

KGB Bar Fantastic Fiction, 85 E. 4th Street, New York, NY, 10003: Wednesday
August 18th, 7-8pm. SF IN SF AT VARIETY THEATER 582 Market Street @
Montgomery (1st floor of The Hobart Bldg), San Francisco, CA 94104: Saturday August
21st, 6-7pm. Tsunami Books 2585 Willamette St. Eugene, OR 97405: Tuesday August
24th, 5-6pm.

13 Lucky Questions with Mary Robinette Kowal
by E. Catherine Tobler

1. Shades of Milk and Honey has been described as Pride and Prejudice with magic.
What drew you to the Regency timeframe?
I love Jane Austen and at the time I was reading Persuasion. I wondered why no one was
writing these intimate family dramas in fantasy.

2. Can you explain some about the process of selling your first book? Was this the
first book you wrote and tried to sell?
This is the fourth book I’ve written and the second one I’ve tried to sell. Mostly it
involves a lot of waiting. I got very lucky and have a wonderful agent who does all the
hard work of actually sending it out. With the first novel, I was sending it to publishers
on my own and that takes forever.

3. One of your short stories (“First Flight”) involves a time machine. If you could
travel back in time to the Regency period, what would you do? Where would you
go? Who would you seek out?
First of all, I’d disguise myself as a man. Ladies had better clothes but not enough
freedom of movement for my taste. Since I’ll still sound like a modern American, I’ll
study with an local acting teacher first to try to blend in. Once I feel comfortable there,
I’ll do a tour of the continent. In particular, I’d like to see the shadow puppeteer Seraphin
in Paris.

4. Did working with Shimmer and getting a behind the scenes look at how
a magazine comes together impact your approach to your own fiction?
Absolutely. Reading slush helped me understand what editors mean when they say things
like a story “doesn’t rise above.” There are a lot of stories that are unflawed but also not
doing anything more than telling a competent story. It’s still an elusive idea, but time
reading the slush pile definitely helped with that.

5. Puppetry, travel, vice president of the SFWA…how do you balance everything you
do and still make time for writing?
Honestly? Structured procrastination. It’s much easier to justify putting something off
if there’s another thing that is more pressing. If you manage them right, generally it’s
possible to use the urge to flee to get everything done.

6. Finish the sentence: “I wish I could _____.”
I wish I could take a nap, now.

7. What is the best piece of writing advice you’ve been given? Alternatively, what’s
the worst?
Kristine Kathryn Rusch said that the manuscript is the tool with which you are telling
the story in your head. Sometimes, you’ve picked the wrong tool. The problem is with
the manuscript and it is not a precious thing. The worst advice was to put all five senses
on every single page. I wound up with a story that was incomprehensible and put my
instructor, who’d told me to do that, to sleep.

8. What favorite book do you wish you could forget, so you could have the pleasure
of reading it for the first time again?
The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell.

9. What was the most frustrating thing about writing Shades of Milk and Honey?
When I realized that the plot had taken a wrong turn and that I’d need to throw out 20,000
words. Bear in mind that I’m an outliner, and yet still. I needed to toss those chapters and
re-outline based on what I was discovering as I was writing.

10. What do you know now that you didn’t know before the writing and
publication of Shades of Milk and Honey?
The word “check” only means “stop” in 1814. So it wouldn’t be used in the sense of “I
shall check on the strawberries” since that would mean “I will stop the strawberries.”

11. Among your collection, which is your favorite typewriter? Or, is there one out
there that you love but haven’t yet been able to acquire?
I have a Duotone Royal that has a sans serif font. It’s a beautiful maroon and black
machine. The one that I’m still looking for is the typewriter I let get away. It was a
Corona #3, folding typewriter, in Oxblood red.

12. Pride and Prejudice or Sense and Sensibility?
Sense and Sensibility

13. When can readers expect Glamour in Glass to hit shelves? Any sneak peeks?
It comes out in early 2012. Here are the opening lines, “There are few things in this
world which can simultaneously delight and dismay in the same manner as a formal
dinner party. Finding oneself a guest of honour, only increases the presentiment of
unease, should one be disposed to such feelings.”Mary Robinette Kowal, Art Director Emeritus for Shimmer, is never still for very long.

She works as a professional puppeteer and voice actor, is the Vice President of Science

Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America, and now has her first novel gracing bookstore

shelves everywhere. Mary took time out of her busy schedule to talk with Shimmer about

that new novel, Shades of Milk and Honey.

If you would like to catch the author and her novel in person, look for her at:

KGB Bar Fantastic Fiction, 85 E. 4th Street, New York, NY, 10003: Wednesday

August 18th, 7-8pm. SF IN SF AT VARIETY THEATER 582 Market Street @

Montgomery (1st floor of The Hobart Bldg), San Francisco, CA 94104: Saturday August

21st, 6-7pm. Tsunami Books 2585 Willamette St. Eugene, OR 97405: Tuesday August

24th, 5-6pm.

13 Lucky Questions with Mary Robinette Kowal

by E. Catherine Tobler

1. Shades of Milk and Honey has been described as Pride and Prejudice with magic.

What drew you to the Regency timeframe?

I love Jane Austen and at the time I was reading Persuasion. I wondered why no one was

writing these intimate family dramas in fantasy.

2. Can you explain some about the process of selling your first book? Was this the

first book you wrote and tried to sell?

This is the fourth book I’ve written and the second one I’ve tried to sell. Mostly it

involves a lot of waiting. I got very lucky and have a wonderful agent who does all the

hard work of actually sending it out. With the first novel, I was sending it to publishers

on my own and that takes forever.

3. One of your short stories (“First Flight”) involves a time machine. If you could

travel back in time to the Regency period, what would you do? Where would you

go? Who would you seek out?

First of all, I’d disguise myself as a man. Ladies had better clothes but not enough

freedom of movement for my taste. Since I’ll still sound like a modern American, I’ll

study with an local acting teacher first to try to blend in. Once I feel comfortable there,

I’ll do a tour of the continent. In particular, I’d like to see the shadow puppeteer Seraphin

in Paris.

4. Did working with Shimmer and getting a behind the scenes look at how

a magazine comes together impact your approach to your own fiction?

Absolutely. Reading slush helped me understand what editors mean when they say things

like a story “doesn’t rise above.” There are a lot of stories that are unflawed but also not

doing anything more than telling a competent story. It’s still an elusive idea, but time

reading the slush pile definitely helped with that.

5. Puppetry, travel, vice president of the SFWA…how do you balance everything you

do and still make time for writing?

Honestly? Structured procrastination. It’s much easier to justify putting something off

if there’s another thing that is more pressing. If you manage them right, generally it’s

possible to use the urge to flee to get everything done.

6. Finish the sentence: “I wish I could _____.”

I wish I could take a nap, now.

7. What is the best piece of writing advice you’ve been given? Alternatively, what’s

the worst?

Kristine Kathryn Rusch said that the manuscript is the tool with which you are telling

the story in your head. Sometimes, you’ve picked the wrong tool. The problem is with

the manuscript and it is not a precious thing. The worst advice was to put all five senses

on every single page. I wound up with a story that was incomprehensible and put my

instructor, who’d told me to do that, to sleep.

8. What favorite book do you wish you could forget, so you could have the pleasure

of reading it for the first time again?

The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell.

9. What was the most frustrating thing about writing Shades of Milk and Honey?

When I realized that the plot had taken a wrong turn and that I’d need to throw out 20,000

words. Bear in mind that I’m an outliner, and yet still. I needed to toss those chapters and

re-outline based on what I was discovering as I was writing.

10. What do you know now that you didn’t know before the writing and

publication of Shades of Milk and Honey?

The word “check” only means “stop” in 1814. So it wouldn’t be used in the sense of “I

shall check on the strawberries” since that would mean “I will stop the strawberries.”

11. Among your collection, which is your favorite typewriter? Or, is there one out

there that you love but haven’t yet been able to acquire?

I have a Duotone Royal that has a sans serif font. It’s a beautiful maroon and black

machine. The one that I’m still looking for is the typewriter I let get away. It was a

Corona #3, folding typewriter, in Oxblood red.

12. Pride and Prejudice or Sense and Sensibility?

Sense and Sensibility

13. When can readers expect Glamour in Glass to hit shelves? Any sneak peeks?

It comes out in early 2012. Here are the opening lines, “There are few things in this

world which can simultaneously delight and dismay in the same manner as a formal

dinner party. Finding oneself a guest of honour, only increases the presentiment of

unease, should one be disposed to such feelings.”